I’ve noticed
That if I notice
At least five unique sights, sounds, or smells
On my morning walks,
Then I know I am present;
On this splendid fleeting day
I am available
Rather than caught up
By thoughts or concerns:
Today I counted
Twenty-two goldfinches
Flying one by one into the top branches;
Blooming bits of yellow blazed
Newly erupted on stalks of roadside mullein;
Under each oak tree in the pasture
A cluster of cattle
With tiny newborns,
The field dotted with a half dozen
Nursery classrooms;
The grasses that benefit from irrigation
Stand out against those that don’t
With a dark Hooker’s Green
zigzag
pattern
Ranging wide across the field,
As if painted with a strong gesture
And a fat brush;
A musky fragrance like wet weeds
Blends with strong manure
And suddenly I am a child tramping along the edges
Of Pennsylvania farmlands.
I notice
I have stopped counting.
Really liked Joy Willow’s Noticing Five Things poem. Felt I was walking along with her. liked the imagery of a “nursery classroom”. liked the extra spaces between certain words adding to the “wide across the field” feeling! Can’t wait to read more of her poetry.